Chapter+25

Amelia opened one eye slowly, carefully just as if something was watching her. She quickly jumped in fear but to her relief it was only Jamie. "Are you okay?" he asked, "Yeah I'm fine but you shouldn't do that! You scared me!" answered Amelia.

Just as Amelia got up, their ancestor came in and told them "Come on, hurry up and get yourselves ready, we need to go as soon as possible." Amelia and Jamie quickly got ready. "We should go out the back door" said Jamie "You know just in case the spirits are waiting for us or something." They very slowly walked out the house, looking all around them to make sure there wasn't anything waiting to jump out at them. They followed their ancestor, not knowing where they were going. They walked for hours along the dirty black, rough road. The crack had caused the road to start crumbling and it was very hard to walk on, making both Amelia's and Jamie's feet very sore.

"Where are we going?" cried Amelia "You'll see" answered their ancestor. Amelia sighed. "But I'm hungry" she moaned, "Stop complaining" said their ancestor. Jamie, not taking any notice of their conversation, thought to himself, long and hard, then said, "Hey, we've been walking for ages now and not once have we seen, heard or been attacked by one of those evil spirits. Do you think this is all over?"

Star: you haven't just had them running! It's good because it is more interesting and different to the other chapters. Star: you haven't used things like said, instead you have used things like complained. Great! Wish: you could maybe make it a bit longer