Chapter+9

Chapter 9
 * The Miracle **

melia! Amelia! Please don’t leave me!” Jamie shouted and tears welled in his eyes. “Please wake up Amelia! Please!” Jamie was kneeling at her side screaming. “Who did this to you?” Jamie didn’t expect an answer. However, he got one. "The spirits wanted the power and did anything they could to get it.” Jamie spun round only to see a woman walking towards him, fear was in his eyes as he moved in front of Amelia’s body to shield it from any harm. “Stay back!” Jamie shouted. “Don’t be frightened little boy, I am here to help you” said the woman, her long blonde hair falling over her face. Her eyes soft as she moved slowly towards Jamie. “Please Jamie let me help her.” She said calmly.  “How do you know my name?” said Jamie alarmed.  “I have been watching you, I am one of your ancestors from five hundred years ago and the spirits took me prisoner and told me if I didn’t want any harm to come to my family I would do as they said, so from that day so many years ago I have never aged. Now that the crack is open I am free to roam the Earth but if it is sealed I will be their prisoner once more. However that’s the way it must be and if you want all the people to come back you have to seal the crack. Even though I can teach you how to deal with the spirits I cannot do it myself because this is a battle you have to fight without me, however you will need Amelia.” Kneeling at Amelia’s side she outstretched her arm over Amelia’s body and muttered softly to herself. Slowly but surely Amelia’s face started to fill with colour and her eyes opened. “Where am I?” whispered Amelia……… Star: Really good description and imagery Star: Introduces the ancestor well Wish: Some of the grammer and puntuation aren't quite correct, perhaps you could read it through and edit it with someone.
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