Chapter+28

** Chapter 28 **
 * An End to the Chase **
 * Jamie shouted "you don’t know what you are doing, you have helped us so much, you can’t go now", and then the ancestor said "the only way to seal the crack is to go in it and seal it from the inside, it’s the only way" Jamie was lost for words he just didn’t know what to say. He didn’t bother trying to disagree because he knew the ancestor was right. With all the hundreds of spirits still coming at them the ancestor said its last goodbye to Jamie and Amelia, and then jumped into the crack along with the pages of the book. The hundreds of other spirits had just caught on to what the ancestor was doing and they screamed "WHAAAT NOOOOOOOOOOOOooooo" and the screams got quieter as they were being sucked into the crack along with the ancestor who was sealing the crack from the inside. As all the spirits where whizzing past Jamie and Amelia a faint "goodbye" could just be heard from the inside of the crack. Jamie said to Amelia "are you ok how is your leg" and Amelia said "it is really sore I really need someone to check it out" but there was no one around to check out Amelia's thought to be broken leg. **
 * Jamie shouted "you don’t know what you are doing, you have helped us so much, you can’t go now", and then the ancestor said "the only way to seal the crack is to go in it and seal it from the inside, it’s the only way" Jamie was lost for words he just didn’t know what to say. He didn’t bother trying to disagree because he knew the ancestor was right. With all the hundreds of spirits still coming at them the ancestor said its last goodbye to Jamie and Amelia, and then jumped into the crack along with the pages of the book. The hundreds of other spirits had just caught on to what the ancestor was doing and they screamed "WHAAAT NOOOOOOOOOOOOooooo" and the screams got quieter as they were being sucked into the crack along with the ancestor who was sealing the crack from the inside. As all the spirits where whizzing past Jamie and Amelia a faint "goodbye" could just be heard from the inside of the crack. Jamie said to Amelia "are you ok how is your leg" and Amelia said "it is really sore I really need someone to check it out" but there was no one around to check out Amelia's thought to be broken leg. **


 * Just as they though all hope had gone there was another earthquake but this on was a lot smaller than the one that had split the town in half. This earthquake was nearly the same and Jamie thought to himself "what have I done to deserve all this" because he thought this earthquake would be bad but nope the Earthquake slowly rumbled the town back together. Now the town was back to one piece Jamie was still worrying about Amelia and her leg. He could see that Amelia was slowly drifting off and would pass out anytime soon. **

Improvements: Perhaps you could say her or him instead of Jamie and Amelia sometimes, but it is mostly very good. You have finished off the chapter well.